First draft of my magazine cover and double page spread

Around 2 weeks ago, I finished my first draft of my magazine front cover and double page spread. Currently I am working on making improvements to it as it doesn't quite look professional yet and like something you'd find on a magazine shelf at your local shop or supermarket.
I will attach a picture of my front cover and double page spread below.

 

  
For my front cover, I have many improvements to make such as filling in empty spaces, making the picture editing look more professional, making the title of the magazine bigger and making it look more like an actual magazine.